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I feel your love
I'm experiencing the thrill
I am caught up in this
The heaviness of this wave
That's tossing me and bending me
Beneath its warm and powerful curl
I'm loving this
This ride of a lifetime
Don't know when or how
It does not matter to me
I am fully aware that you are in this
All I can do is stare
Allow it to take over my mind, body, soul
Hmm, the way you love me
This has become my way of life
Thursday, December 16, 2010
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2 comments:
Mazine, I love the texture of this ballad, especially the -ing words in lines 2, 5 & 7. They give the poem such presence and immediacy.
NYA- Thanks!I hope that my deepest yearning and longing for this love is fully expressed in my words...:D
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