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Thursday, November 19, 2009

Skeptic


She said "hello" and "welcome"
She wished this our home will become
She had a bit of a wild look in her eye
Was it excitement or insanity?

She flashed her pearly whites
As she clasped my hand so tight
And said ever so softly
"This here is meant for you"

I never held hands so small
Or experienced His plan so vividly
For in her hand was a piece of poetry
Sent from the lover of my soul!


...to be continued

5 comments:

Myne said...

This is intriguing, who was she?

The Author said...

It took 3 reads for me to find out who makes the cast of characters. A Mother, A new-born Baby Girl, and our Lord, Jesus Christ. Your poem is subtle and elegant. Please continue it.

Sankofa said...

Nice poem Maxine! I like the unexpected complexity of it.

Fragilelooks said...

NICE WORK. PLS I WANA SEE THE CONTINUATION.

Shels said...

awww...